about the part with the broader theme, i definitely forgot about connecting it to the rest of the world (obviously), i could probly include some examples of how they impact the world and have branches overseas, i could also include how the kids develop into better people which helps them in their future lives as leaders in their career and getting along with other and working as a team
for having 4-H mention not immediatley i thought it was a little bit confusing, but i thought might be a good technique to draw the reader in cuz they wanted to figure out what i was talking about
and i have no idea what to do for a title....i didn't know what to do for it, and then i forgot about it
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